I just purchased that book a couple of weeks ago and have read just a bit of it. I dont feel competent enough to critique it, per se, but I do find the reading easy to follow and am enjoying his perspective. He is very big on tight stops using the high of the previous day's close (iirc) and capturing expected moves in patterns. For example, a future trades between 1105 and 1120, then he looks to capture 15 points on the breakout.